Showing posts with label duet. Show all posts
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Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Duet Series: "Young Folks" by Peter, Bjorn, and John


Structure

Well, here is a simple song.

Verse
Chorus
Verse
Chorus

Really? You might say. Are there only 2 musical sections that are simply repeated twice? Well, basically, yes!

Let's look a little closer though:

Verse 1 has two formal sections within it that are sung twice with different lyrics. The first one is sung by Him, the second is sung by Her.

1.1 Sung by Him:
"If I told you things I did before, told you how I used to be,
Would you go along with someone like me?
If you knew my story word for word, had all of my history
would you go along with someone like me?"

1.2 Sung by Her:
"I did before and had my share, it didn't lead nowhere
I would go along with someone like you
It doesn't matter where you've been, who you were hanging with
We can stick around and see this night through"

Chorus sung by Both:
"And we don't care about the young folks
talking 'bout the young style
And we don't care about the old folks
talking 'bout the old style too

And we don't care about our own faults
talking 'bout our own style
All we care about is talking
talking only me and you"

Verse 2 goes like this
Verse 2.1 sung by Her
"Usually when things have gone this far people tend to disappear
No one will surprise me unless you do"
Sung by Him:
"I can tell there's something going on, hours seem to disappear
Everyone is leaving, I'm still with you"
Verse 2.2 sung by Both
"It doesn't matter what we do, where we are going to
We can stick around and see this night through"

But, alas! What an anomaly! The second half of the second verse is cut short. They only sing those two lines in unison and then go straight on into the second chorus instead of singing the two more lines that would make the second verse of equal length with the first verse. But hey, why not? There's no reason to keep singing words just for the sake of structural evenness. In fact, as we've seen with other songs, the second verse is often not only shortened but cut in half.

The second chorus goes on ad infinitum from here to the end of the recording.

Lyrics

What are they saying?

-Verse 1.1
The first half of the first verse, sung by Him, communicates a very simple sentiment: if you knew the real me, would you still like me? It's not only a simple sentiment, it's an extremely vulnerable one and therefore draws the listener in immediately. He asks that question twice with different words, and that makes up the whole first half of verse 1. The first four lines are the same question asked twice in different words. This allows the listener to meditate. It takes time to focus on one issue before moving ahead in the story/conversation. And, taking the time to meditate on this particular issue, the simple and vulnerable one, is probably a very important reason for why this song exhibits such emotional immediacy.

-Verse 1.2
The first line of the girl's response doesn't make a lot of sense to me. The lyrics are a bit obscure until she sings "I would go along with someone like you," which is, obviously, a direct answer to that vulnerable question posed by Him in the first four lines. Her next two lines are a continued and MORE DETAILED response to his question. That, to me, is the key to going deep into one issue and keeping a song focused–one must find the interesting facets, the deeper details, the other words for one issue. The Guy asks the same question twice with different words, the Girl responds to that question with details, thoughts of her own. A lot of time and words are devoted to one question and one answer.

-Chorus
The chorus is sort of it's own thing as far as the lyrical concept goes. It doesn't directly relate to that question and answer in the first verse. What it does do is it focuses on the idea of nothing being important outside of their relationship. Question: Do they ever say "nothing is important outside of our relationship"? Heck no!!!! That would be really really boring. Instead, they find another way to say it. They use words that convey that idea in terms of its interesting facets, deeper details, or other words. It's not direct. It's resourceful. It relates the central idea, nothing is important outside our relationship, to other ideas. "We DON'T care about the young folks..." "we DON'T care about the old folks." "All we care about is talking, talking only me and you."

-Verse 2.1
The story moves forward here. After the inner thoughts of insecurity are voiced in verse 1, we see these two people actually start to come together. They show us the situation of how they talk with each other for longer than other people do, they stay with each other for longer than other people tend to stay with them, we get some butterflies ourselves as they start realizing what's happening between themselves.

-Verse 2.2
This is that shortened section, but it's a really important one. This is the line where they are finally together. "It doesn't matter what we do, where we are going to, we can stick around and see this night through." It addresses the doubts of the first verse with "It doesn't matter what we do, where we are going to..." And then, it focuses on their togetherness with "we can stick around and see this night through." Also, important to note about that last line is that it was used earlier in the first verse. That makes for a tidy wrap up of all the issues in the song by bringing back a line from earlier that applies just as well to this later place. It's like that idea in classical music of returning "home" by recapitulating the main theme at the end of the symphony.

-Chorus and tag
The chorus is repeated verbatim, and then the tag is just the last line of the chorus repeated over and over. "talking only me and you..."

Other thoughts
I love what this and the last duet entry, "Nothing Better," does as a conversation between two voices. Usually a song sung solo is a conversation with the self, a sort of lyric monologue. But, with this song, poetry and dialogue get to work together. We get to hear an explicitly back and forth conversation that uses words like poetry instead of straight prose like you would expect to hear in a spoken dialogue.

Also, in order to delineate this kind of duet from a song like "Sound of Silence" by Simon and Garfunkle, which I think needs to be thought of differently, we can call this kind of duet a dramatic lyrical duet. Certainly Simon and Garfunkle sing duets, but they aren't conversations between two lyrical voices. I wish there were more dramatic lyrical duets like this being written and recorded. Cheers, and happy songwriting!

Saturday, March 19, 2011

Duet Series - "Nothing Better" by Postal Service: ONE Perspective on ONE Situation


This song is great for so many reasons. One is that the lyrics and sentiment expressed by the guy throughout the whole song are typical of most heartbreak songs–he uses a striking image about how broken his heart is, he can't accept the truth of her leaving, he won't let her go, he brings to mind a beautiful image of what they could be like together–, but the girl brings the twist to this song. Her lyrics and general sentiment is balanced, thoughtful, and realistic–she reminds him of all the issues and probably the mistakes that he made and how he hurt her. She cripples the overly emotional arguments of the guy with her rational counter-arguments.

So what can be learned from this song? Lots of things, of course. I would like to point out that each of the singers has ONE perspective on the ONE situation. The ONE situation is that she is leaving him heartbroken. His perspective is that he wants her back, and he remains overly emotional about it the whole time. Her perspective is that she is leaving him, and she describes the relationship consistently for what it is every time she sings. Her character is subtly complicated or deepened by her one line of doubt, "You've got a lure I can't deny," but it doesn't damage the integrity of everything else she has said previously because, of course, there was something she liked about him before all the trouble started.

Here are three, helpful road maps starting from most summarized and finishing with most detailed. These road maps show who is singing where, and what he or she is singing when. The songs form breaks down into 1st verse, 1st chorus, 2nd verse, 2nd chorus, and tag, which is, musically, the last two lines of the verse sung twice.

Very Summarized Road Map
V1
The Guy's heartbroken perspective on the relationship.

C1
Guy's romanticized vision of what the relationship could be.

V2
Girl's rational perspective.

C2
Guy's persistent romanticized vision.
Girl's frustration with the guy's perspective.

Tag
Guy's final attempt to make things right.
Girl's final refusal to give him another chance.

More Detailed Road Map
V1
Guy: I'm broken hearted, and you're deserting me for someone better. Wah wah!

C1
Guy: Imagine us together living happily ever after.

V2
Girl: You're forgetting about all of the issues we have. You think our relationship is good, but you're being selective in your memories. Let me explain the truth to you. Please let me go.
Guy: I can't. I love you so.

C2
Guy: Imagine us together living happily ever after.
Girl: Stop trying to win me back with sappy words about a romanticized vision of us.

Tag
Guy: I know I've made mistakes, but I will never hurt you again
Girl: I am a little bit conflicted, but you've had your chance, it's over.

Most Detailed Road Map
Verse 1: sung by him
The audience enters the song right in the middle of the guy's situation.
Starts with an image that describes the state of his heart.
"...call a surgeon...repair this broken heart..."
Gets accusatory "...this broken heart that you're deserting for better company."
He can't accept her leaving him.
Goalie image about him blocking the door, trying to keep her from leaving. A little over the top, but then the next lines are more sensible.
he proposes his solution: tell me what I can do different, and I'll do it.

Chorus: sung by him
Wouldn't life be great if the situation were like this:
We get married and grow old together.

Verse 2: sung by her
Her perspective
She claims he's got a selective memory. "...revisions and gaps in history..."
"Gaps in history" doesn't directly respond to anything that the guy said in the first verse, but it does indirectly respond to the accusatory tone in "...this broken heart that you're deserting for better company." When we hear "You're getting carried away feeling sorry for yourself with these revisions and gaps in history," we imagine a fuller perspective on their relationship including rough patches that the guy is ignoring.
The girl uses a business/academic presentation metaphor to show her reasonable perspective on why she is leaving him.
She responds to the line he sang earlier about blocking the door when she asks him to let her go.
He interjects here and reiterates that he can't accept her leaving.

Extended Chorus: sung by both
Wouldn't life be great if the situation were like this:
We get married and grow old together.
(He's still stuck on his "idealistic future" in spite of her reminder about the truth of their issues.)
She sings on top of that line and reprimands him for being stuck in his misconceptions about the reality of their relationship. She accuses him of holding an idealistic vision of their future.
Her next line about sutures is brilliant because it picks up on the medical motif from the first line of the song. Also, sutures can be representative here of the truth about their relationship that the guy keeps "pulling out" of the equation in his head. She's saying that if he lets the truth stay in the equation or "wound" caused by her leaving, the "truth-sutures" will eventually heal him, but if he keeps pulling them out of the wound, it will never heal.

Tag
Finally he admits to having made mistakes, and he promises to change.

She admits that there is something about him that she is still attracted to,
but she can't continue to give him chance after chance "so say goodbye."

Final Thought
So, why does the same chorus that the guy sings work after each verse? "Tell me am I right to think that there could be nothing better than making you my bride and slowly growing old together." It works because the song doesn't show a change in either person's perspective or feelings. He keeps singing the same sentiment the whole time even while she sings counter-arguments on top of his lines. The song shows a single state of each person's perspective, which provides the listener with compelling or heart wrenching conflict between two people.